Barom! Barom! Barom! Barom! was all I could hear, with my sister Uroosa besides me on the very last seat of the coaster! We were about to ride on the scariest coaster in Vegas! Oh boy! It sure felt scary, as we climbed up the rail, I started to wonder how long we had been going up for it kept going on and on, and on. I wanted to see how high up we were, but as I went to peer, two security tags pulled me back, one over by my neck and the other on my chest. Suddenly the coaster came to a halt, " Ah! this would be the perfect time to look back" and as soon as I did, the coaster zoomed higher at 200 km/hour. I could feel my stomach turn and unlike most people I just began to laugh. The coaster rushed faster than a cheetah to the earth; it didn't even stop when it landed, but went straight back up again, I wasn't used to such opposites, but it scared me the most when I saw the three consequetuve turns. The first time my coins fell off, the second was when my favourite ring fell off, and last but not least, my glasses slipped straight off of my eyes. When we were done I came out with a sparined neck and a terrible headache! Oh I knew it would hurt.
Wednesday, August 20, 2008
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2 comments:
i like how you give me the felling of the sound and what happend when you turned on the rollercoaster and what happend to you like when your glasses fell of and ur coins came out of you poket but i would have liked to know what happended to your glases where did they fall did you loos them or exct good job :)
What I found interesting is how the start used good onomatopoeia for a sense of the power in the engine that shows the coaster can get high velocity. I also liked the way you explained losing track of time while heading up it shows how it’s a long way meaning the fall is bigger. You used good vocabulary like “zoomed” but I would have wished you used less simple words like looked, scary and stop.
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